impending storm; smell the fear woeful sky; feel the air mounting clouds dwarf the land screaming winds cry tempest plans watch the leaves rip from trees hear the distant electric hum brace yourself here it comes
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Great poem Jess, like I said. I like the way you shortned certain lines to one word. I have been told in many english classes that that is one of the most effective ways of obtaining the reader's attnetion. You see columnists do that a lot. I like the words: hum, electric, and woeful the best. Howling winds is a little cliche. But excellent poem.
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Hi Jesse,
You do have a fantastic blog, but then, I'm your Mom.....
Love your poetry!!!!
Keep it up!
Love,
mom
Great poem Jess, like I said. I like the way you shortned certain lines to one word. I have been told in many english classes that that is one of the most effective ways of obtaining the reader's attnetion. You see columnists do that a lot. I like the words: hum, electric, and woeful the best. Howling winds is a little cliche. But excellent poem.
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